Ulluhtac's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Why I'm a Ninja]

this is awsome

i sat through most of this just kinda listening, following the story.. i dont know if it's the fact that i'm drinking coffee at fucking 10 in the evening or if it really that funny but that last line got me cracking up.
"then the guilt kicked in, i used my ninja skills for wrong, so i did what every honorable ninja would do... i hid in my room and didnt tell a fucking soul!"
I was still cracking up when you faked us out of the credits and that made me laugh even harder.

Animation: was good
Artwork: got the point across
Sound: youvoice is very clear, didnt even notice if there was music or not and thats when you know you have something good.
Storyline: like i said, cracked my crazy drinking coffee at nightime ass up!

[DodgeBall: Sports Odyssey]

too long

you shoulda had the ball violently smash into his face just as the music was ending and shoulda made the ending more dramatic, also the ball hitting his face lacked the ever so satisfiying "pong" noise that i'm sure everyone is expecting.

everything else is great you just need to fix those things and it'll be good.

[LoZ Pegs Backgrounds]

looks cool

i dont know what your doing with these, but they really carry the feel of OOT very well, it looks really really cool, just make sure to match this awsomeness with solid gameplay that is fun and not boring or slow and you have something that will easily smash frontpage.

Whistdead responds:

Front page would be great, and I thank you for the positive comment. These are the background for level of a game in the making. The animation and scenes will be placed in the back and are mostly for show, the game field is where all the action will be taking place.

[Me likes pie]

whoa

very trippy...
you music keeps playing after it returns to the main screen with the button.
everything else was ok.. that is exept for storyline.. which is pretty much nonexistant.

[gohan vs sasuke]

hey not bad!

your very first one ever huh? sure beats mine.

Animation: not bad for a sprite movie. try zooming into the characters give em close ups, pan the sceenery as needed this makes the viewer feel closer to the action.
Sound: add in some voices, even if you sound nothing like the characters you have on the sceen something is better than nothing. some background music helps to set the mood too.
Artwork: you had decent enough sprites, kudos
Storyline: everyone likes a good fightscene, everyone likes for the fightscene to have more perpose than just "hey who are you? "i came to kill you!" "rarrrgggh!" too. either come up with more of a motive to kick each others ass or give no motives at all, like they are already staring each other down from the beginning then start fighting like 1 second later.

Overall: keep practicing and you will get good. take my advise to heart, and watch some other famous fight scenes from sprite flash artists to get some ideas. You like DBZ, go watch Alvin-Earthworm's super mario Z series, its awsome and will undoubtly give you great ideas on how to do things.

chiquito156 responds:

thankz

[Fluffy creatures 1]

interesting

Aniamtion: simple. isnt much more to describe it, nothing really flashy.
Sound: needs ALOT of work, it was very quiet i had to max my speakers to just be able to hear them talking. you need music and sound effects too, those help move your story along.
Artwork: same as your animation, simple. not anything really wrong with simplicity but nothing eye-catching either.
Story: slow and kinda boring. i couldnt even find myself cracking a smile watching it, which sucks becuase i wanted to like it. your flash only really has 2 jokes in it and neither of them are original.

Overall: if you can fix your sound issues and come up with a decent storyline i think this would be good, your artwork and animation are simple but that can be polished with more experiance.

[Credit Crunch]

CREDIT CRUNCH CEREAL YAYS!

Good job, that sums it up.. awsome freekn job!

oh right you want a review not a simple pat on the back..
animation was very smooth
sound great
artwork perfect
and storyline was spot on, i love thesekinda things that point out all our weaknesses and controversies like this.

[PSP Squirrels]

YAYS!

Finaly, someone else noticed how utterly retarded those commercials are!
"It's like a nut, you can play outside.."
I feel that this is the one of the reasons (besides releasing nothing but shit on it) that the psp died a slow and horrible death and the DS still dominates the hanheld market.
I thank you egorapter for showing sony why they suck.

[Sonic Shorts: Volume 4]

I <3 SONIC SHORTS!!!1

This is pure awsome.
Everything was just plain perfect.
My faverate part is knuckles at the end after the credits.
"what just becuase i'm standing next to the back button i'm supossed to do something??!!?" (click) "STOP CLICKING ON ME!!!" (click) "ALRIGHT THATS IT!!!" (smash) ROFL XD

[Jerky Punch]

well that was certainly interesting

I didnt quite understand why you decided to do this audio skit with two boxers in a ring but whatev..
um.. yeah the retailer guy was a jackass, someone like that would go outta business real quick like if they was really like that. "oh you want the riding one huh well you is a lazy bastard ain't ya?" thats the part where i'd be like "well fuck you too dumbass!" and hang up.

Anyways i digress, you said that it was a simple lip synching practice and for what it is its decent, no point puting input for the other categories like i would normally do becuase thats not what it is, its a lip synching practice and you thought it was funny so you posted it.