+17 for the song at the end! ...... oh i only have up to 5? DAMNIT!
Seriously though, i liked this quite a bit, it really captured how horrible and stupid SF assualt was.
only thing i have to complain about was that it was difficult to understand some of the things people said, which ironically fits it perfectly because that's how the game was too.
also, your always going to be copying SOMEONE, egoraptor is a good person to copy. and anyone who cant understand that just because you have the same kind of humor that egoraptor has doesn't mean that your just ripping off his ideas needs to pull their heads out of their ass! So what if he has the same kind of humor? you like egoraptors style right? so more people like egoraptor is a GOOD THING!
i look forward to seeing more of your work