what in the bloody hell was that?
what was that supossed to be? i couldnt watch more than 30 seconds of this ... whatever the hell you would call this.... its the same thing over and over agian as far as i can tell.. and do you kow what a collab is? a collab is many peoples work put into one thing.. the only person i see is you.. thats not a collab..
2 Answer your question...it was a flash cartoon called In The Beginning...sorry you didn't like it but who cares what YOU think anyway right? go 2 hell man
good good
That was excellent. let me break it down for you.
Sound, perfect! you finally got the syncing issue fixed!
Artwork, good, you've deffenatly got your own style.
animation, coulda put a little more work into it, i wanted to see that ball fly down at high speed down the ramp and make a bone shattering slam, and then on the second one you show like a side view of him when it hits and i looks like it hits so hard the guys watching cross their legs in sympathy then show him cough up blood or something.. just a thought.. i personally like for action to have more feel to it.
Storyline, very good, i like how you put in past referances. oh and it was funny too.
Overall it was an excellent piece, i just want to feel the action a bit more, other than that its perfect!
yeah I'm too lazy Haha
I was going to show a side view but yeah :D
it was awsome and funny
Till you gotto the part with the stupid and annoying luigi screaming MARIO overand over agian with no purpose.
its a shame too this coulda been awsome beyond belief and made front page.
Luigi killed it.
I don't think you get the point of the movie
ugh.. how many is this now?
like 4 of these now?
What is it with everyone copying that one flash animation? seriously!
i mean the first one was.. ok becuase he was remaking something a flashnoob did and just making it the way he was originally intending it to be, the second remake by someone else was.. unnessesary, and now this one?
i mean i suposse i technically have to give it points for quality but your getting a low score becuase your just reusing the same concept thats been redone way too many times already.. that and that gay ass song is startin to piss me off.
Come up with your own storyline and you'll get more points for it.
Its for a contest, its meant to have a similar storyline, please consider this the next time you review another entry to this contest.
looks cool
i dont know what your doing with these, but they really carry the feel of OOT very well, it looks really really cool, just make sure to match this awsomeness with solid gameplay that is fun and not boring or slow and you have something that will easily smash frontpage.
Front page would be great, and I thank you for the positive comment. These are the background for level of a game in the making. The animation and scenes will be placed in the back and are mostly for show, the game field is where all the action will be taking place.
hey not bad!
your very first one ever huh? sure beats mine.
Animation: not bad for a sprite movie. try zooming into the characters give em close ups, pan the sceenery as needed this makes the viewer feel closer to the action.
Sound: add in some voices, even if you sound nothing like the characters you have on the sceen something is better than nothing. some background music helps to set the mood too.
Artwork: you had decent enough sprites, kudos
Storyline: everyone likes a good fightscene, everyone likes for the fightscene to have more perpose than just "hey who are you? "i came to kill you!" "rarrrgggh!" too. either come up with more of a motive to kick each others ass or give no motives at all, like they are already staring each other down from the beginning then start fighting like 1 second later.
Overall: keep practicing and you will get good. take my advise to heart, and watch some other famous fight scenes from sprite flash artists to get some ideas. You like DBZ, go watch Alvin-Earthworm's super mario Z series, its awsome and will undoubtly give you great ideas on how to do things.
thankz
Dude you've got skillz!
Please do continue, if this was your first ever flash, then you will make things that will blow my mind away.
lol i hope i an improve...lol
not bad
Kinda random and pointless, but not bad, i found myself chuckling a few times.
Only thing wrong (and i know this is trivial and i'm going to sound like a rejected fanboy with no life but i'm not i assure you) you did goku's voice for the dino going supah saiyan then made him yell picolo's special beam cannon... Shoulda made him say kamayhamayha.
I thought someone might notice this!
I actually couldn't find a decent-quality sound effect, so I went with what I had!
the gaurd is just as stupid as the pres
"Oh what is that? oh its my phone i better answer that!" seriously? i never woulda guessed...
Eh i didnt find it very humorous...
I'm sure someone else will.. but not me, just not my style.
aah come on... lighten up buddy it's all just light hearted humour. :/
OK you want more than "OMG AWSOME" or "COOL"?
Alright i'll give it to ya then.
Animation: Could use a little smoothing out but wasnt bad.
Artwork: a little scratchy but good, i like it and it adds its own feel to it.
Sound: well all you play is the background sound but for this kinda flash thats all you need so i'll talk about the quality of it, it almost sounded like that you was listening to the song on your puter and you had your mic sitting next to your speaker with a recording program recording the song in a format that you could use in flash, nothing really wrong with that if thats what you did, but for some reason it sounds a little faded.
Story: looks interesting, if we actually got to see the story, this looks more like the beggining theme for a tv show.
Overall: It leaves a nice feel to it and i like it, but now i wanna see more, i want to see the characters doing something besides looking in random directions in sync with a catchy song... i want to know their stories.
heh, somebody noticed the wierdness of the song =_= But anyways, for some reason, when I sync the song to the flash, it turns to sound like that and I don't know why... And it is the beginning theme for a tv show...I did some outside work of the characters actually interacting but it's all scratchy, black and white and it'll take me awhile to finish it, but I will try.
These characters have actual storied bhind them, outside here, I've got all the stories and comics already done and laid out. Whether I animate them or not will dpend if I have enough time.
But thank you for the response and if ever I animate the story, you'll be the first to know XD
Age 37, Male
Joined on 3/3/08
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