The fidelity of the artwork was freaking amazing and the animation was fairly good too. the only gripe is that while I didn't expect where the joke was going, it still wasn't an exceptionally exciting one.
Also this movie takes place in France so USA laws wouldn't apply...
*Looks at tags on the side*
Weird, creepy, WTF.
WTF indeed, I don't understand what this is...
Is... is that the point? I can't even... i'm thinking about this too much.
It ended too soon!
I loved how this radically changed tune on a whim, first all cute then it got super dark then all of a sudden it was a super power anime, I wanted to see more! I wanted to see them fight!
A girl, lying awake in her bed, afraid to go to sleep because of the things that happen at night in the dark dilapidated dwelling she oh so unfortunately inhabits is greeted by a magical wonder, a way to escape!
She has been gifted with a way out, a way to leave her circumstances behind, but for a brief moment she quietly contemplates, should she really? Maybe there is someone she feels like she would miss? Or perhaps she is thinking about other girls who are also in her position, maybe she can help them escape too?
Before she can think too long on it though a man walks in, he sees her, in her cute little outfit, oh this ought to be fun... but then he sees the window open, your not thinking of escaping are you? He tries to wrestle her to the bed, she fights him "not again!" she says to herself before a wave of emotion washes over her and pushes the assailant away with force.
She surveys what just happened, there is no turning back now, she goes to the window and leaps, feeling the new power within her she lets it swift her away. The man completely stunned and in shock raises his hand to the back of his head, blood. What just happened?
Am I close?
I would say that escalated quickly, but the stickers on the side of the desk were subtle subtext.
As someone who works in the claims dept of a major car insurance company, I really resonate and appreciate the interview with psychopebbles. My job is to help you, and I could do it a hell of of lot better if you would just SHUT THE F#$* UP!
I'm a bit confused... they are patchwork people right? Yet they still shower, wouldn't they get moldy? And they also have to eat? Also if every 10 hours everyone goes berserk and starts trying to murder each other and steal things, wouldn't their society be built around that? like everything is made to be done within those 10 hours so that everyone could get somewhere safe when the time hits? Or is it more like everyone just goes anonymous for a few mins and they act out their deepest desires while they can?
Am i overthinking all of this?
It's really well done and your main character is really cute!
Animation: it exists, it's fast and frantic and jumps from one thing to another very quickly but for the most part you can tell what is happening - 3
Artwork: it's kinda sloppy but once again you can tell what is on the screen and you can tell it's something that was supposed to just be quickly done, in this particular instance it adds to the character - 3
Music: The ambient music certainly does set the tone correctly, to the point that i had to watch it again for this section of the review. If your music selection fits so well that people don't even remember if it was there upon thinking about it then it did it's job. If it was out of place or not there then it would have been noticeable - 5
Voice acting: I was going to put this in with the last category and just call it sound, but after writing so much about the music i felt it better to separate them. You can certainly tell that the same guy did all the voices, while some effort was put in make the voices at least somewhat fit the character they belong to, all of the human guy characters sound exactly the same, if you didn't have a screen to look at you wouldn't know they were different characters - 2
Story: The pacing was really fast and while i feel like that was sort of the point, as you could tell this was just something that was rushed through to just make as fast as possible, i feel like it could have benefited from a bit of a re-balance of timing. It was in the same style that Hollywood does their movie trailers and seemed to be a parody of it, even in a parody though, you need to mimic the pacing of the source material. The end of it was paced a bit better with the two turtles arguing over the straw, although that was a rather fair amount of foul language and F-bombs dropped for it to be considered "E" for everyone, maybe a "T" rating would have been more appropriate? - 3
Overall: It has a rushed feeling, but in some ways it adds to the charm a bit, it didn't make me laugh personally but i know some people that it would and it was still ultimately entertaining.
This was freaking amazing! I am absolutely blown away at just how awesome this is! This could be a TV show, it's better than a lot of actual shows I've enjoyed watching.
The animation, the artwork, the storytelling, the pacing, the comedy, I could go on and on about how everything was so perfect.
This deserves a 5 from me and from everyone who comes in contact with it, and it should be something that just about everyone should see. This is more than professional grade entertaining and I want more.
The animation and artwork is amazing! Your sound choice is spot on, the entire presentation in general is professional grade all around and I can certainly appreciate the amount of time this must have took to make.
That aside, your storytelling needs work, a lizard and his pet (friend maybe?) snail are traveling the desert looking for water, a bird in a tower also just ran out of water and they both find the water at the end. A stork scares the bird in the tower and then he shoots him down with an admittedly impressive shot from a trebuchet, and the stork lands on the cultists altar and they eat him. That's it?
It's really easy to make a story with no dialog, the main thing to remember is goals, conflict and resolution, what is each character's goal in the film? what is the conflict that keeps them from achieving that goal, and finally, how do they overcome it? This is basic story composition, now of course you can turn it on it's head and twist it and flip it around and by all means be creative with it, but those are the the basics and they need to exist in some way for a cohesive story.
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